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my films of 2012

Posted in about me, movielist on January 15, 2013 by scriptguyphil

it is now the time to take a quick look back at last year and list the movies of 2012 that i enjoyed the most.

i don’t like ranking films as such (although, as usual, i do have a favourite), and i don’t restrict the list to 10 films – last year there were only seven films, this year there were twelve that i loved!

so without further ado, here we go…

favourite cinema films — in chronological order

tinker, tailor, soldier, spy

written by bridget o’connor & peter straughan

a sharp, subtle spy drama that was as intense as it was exciting. an amazing script that takes a complicated and dense book and turns it into an elegant and concise screenplay.

attack the block

written by joe cornish

a horror comedy with an underlying social message where the script makes you side with, and become emotionally attached to, what seems to be a band of thug teenagers. pure entertainment.

shame

written by steve mcqueen and abi morgan

a deeply felt character study of addiction and loneliness, with a script that gets into the souls of the two main characters.

the raid: redemption

written by gareth evans

one of the most explosive action films i have ever seen. the script may not be deep, but it did just enough to be emotionally engaging and made sure that the fight sequences also developed character and story.

martha marcy may marlene

written by sean durkin

another sublime character study that looks at brainwashing both within a cult and within a family unit. the script is beautifully downplayed.

sleep tight

written by alberto marini

an intimate thriller that would have made hitchcock proud, the script balanced dark humour and disturbing chills to perfection. a scene in the middle with the main character trying to get out of an apartment is probably my favourite scene of the year.

killer joe

written by tracy letts

another dark comedy with disturbing elements, the script takes some terrible people and makes them fascinating to watch.

we need to talk about kevin

written by lynne ramsey & rory kinnear

a gripping look at a mother/child relationship told in a truly fascinating way. the script was sparse and intelligent, yet provocative when it needed to be.

take shelter

written by jeff nichols

this is a masterful film that will stay with me for a very long time. a powerful, yet delicate script with beautifully written characters full of nuance and depth.

weekend

written by andrew haigh

an intense and tender romance. the writing and performances are incredibly natural and get you right under the skin of the characters. it avoids cliches and preaching and simply concentrates on the way that two people can fall in love.

take this waltz — **my favourite film of 2012**

written by sarah polley

a beautiful and delicate film. truthful in the sense that i saw parts of myself in all the main characters, which made the emotions very real. a script filled with emotional pull, this is the film of last year that made me engage with the story and characters more than any other – it had a very strong impact on me, which is why it is my film of the year!

ernest et celestine

written by daniel pennac

a true joy! beautifully animated, it was touching, hilarious and completely captivating. the script was simple and effective, with just enough anarchy to balance its tenderness and its fun.

other notable films seen at the cinema this year

50/50 (will reiser)  –  moneyball (steven zaillian and aaron sorkin)

young adult (diablo cody)  –  magic mike (reid carolin)

ted (seth macfarlane & alec sulkin & wellesley wild)

grabbers (kevin lehane)  –  looper (rian johnson)

favourite films seen on the small screen —

the good, the bad, the weird (jee-woon kim, min-suk kim)

agora (alejandro amenábar & mateo gil)  –  away from her (sarah polley)

stake land (nick damici, jim mickle)  –  girlwalk//allday (no credited writer)

sound of noise (ola simonsson, johannes stjärne nilsson)

the guard (john michael mcdonagh)

 

these films were my favourites because the stories and characters engaged me on an emotional level to a very high degree – and that is what i hope for every time the lights go down, or crack open a new script for that matter!

to catch my mini-reviews throughout the year you can join me on twitter and facebook.

i hope 2013 is your best year yet, so until next time…

happy writing

phil

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mini movie reviews 2012 – part 1

Posted in about me, movielist on May 1, 2012 by scriptguyphil

i thought that i’d post my mini movie reviews for the first four months of 2012 in one handy little blog post for those of you who are interested.

do you agree or disagree? what are the best films you’ve seen this year?

(note:- the reviews have been taken from my twitter feed and my facebook page, hence the varying length!)

first up, the films i’ve seen on the big screen:-

50/50 was a real treat. it was lol funny and very touching, never straying into being over-sentimental. the well-written script obviously came from the heart, but it was let down a little in the way the female characters were written – a female co-writer would have been a real advantage! having said that anna kendrick, angelica huston and bryce dallas howard all did great work to give their characters weight. highly recommended!

enjoyed moneyball. a bit long and started to drag at the end, but a solid script and well made all round. brad pitt & jonah hill had great chemistry, and you have to give props to pitt for pushing it thru some tough times to get it made. pitt could well be the robert redford everyone thought he would be. 30 years ago redford would have been a shoo in for this role!

tinker tailor soldier spy was a great adaptation. characters are beautifully realised with raw emotion being more important than ‘spying’!

young adult was refreshing. strong tone and characters with an unlikeable lead that was fascinating to watch. also avoids an ‘easy’ ending

attack the block was all kinds of awesome! i waited nearly a year to see it and it eventually came to denmark. it was funny, exciting and had some great action sequences. the script followed the genre in the proper way, but subverted the standard genre elements enough to keep the audience on their toes. couldn’t recommend it enough!

project x is a bad movie but i’d be lying if i said there weren’t a few laugh out loud moments. best seen with friends and alcohol enhanced!

mission: impossible – ghost protocol was a good entry in the franchise – better than 2 and 3, but still not matching 1 for a proper mission impossible film. it has a nicely complicated plot and better characters than normal. it suffers from a climax that, though good, is overshadowed by earlier action sequences, and although i liked jeremy renner in the film, his character was really poorly written and could have been way more complex than he was. still, it was 2 hours of fun and entertainment!!

shame was a powerful piece of emotional storytelling. minimal dialogue, stunning visuals and great performances combined to make a truly compelling film. i wish more films were made this way!

hugo was visually dynamic and the attention to detail was exquisite. my problem with the film was that the script was so cluttered. subplots, unnecessary characters and flashbacks completely swamp the fragile emotion of a beautifully simple story. the overtly theatrical acting (a bad choice by scorsese, though i saw what he was going for) and a lead actor that just couldn’t carry the film meant that it didn’t hit me emotionally – even though i am a film lover! a disappointment!

the hunger games was mildly entertaining, but definitely lacked the edge it needed to be a great movie. not necessarily in the violence, which i thought they did pretty well for a pg13, but the whole felt very superficial in its political and societal satire. its an interesting enough world, i just hope they use it better in the sequels. jennifer lawrence proved that she has what it takes and that winter’s bone wasn’t just a one off.

the passion of joan of arc is one of my favourite films and i got the chance to see it again, but with an unusual twist – on a big screen in a church, on good friday and with live organ accompaniment! the film itself is magnificent with maria falconetti giving perhaps the greatest acting performance ever seen, and the music was well performed and the organ sound felt very appropriate for the film. a great event set up by søren voigt-jakobsen.

the raid exceeded my high expectations! the action was not just intense – it was really intense! it is about two-thirds solid action and i was worried it would get monotonous, but it was consistently inventive and kept evolving. i anticipated a paper thin story, but it was more complex than you would normally find in an action film. the big surprise was how much depth the major characters had. it is violent fun for action fans, but this had hidden depths that made the experience all the more pleasurable!!

martha marcy may marlene was a strong character study, with exceptional writing and great performances. very tense and full of emotion – highly recommended!

sleep tight is a terrific new film by jaume balagueró one of the rec directors. it is a psychological thriller that truly delivers in all departments. it is creepy, disturbing and, at times, downright hilarious! one sequence in particular is one of the most tense and funniest sequences i have seen for some time. the writing and character work is excellent and it is expertly directed. highly recommended!

killer joe was a surreal and visceral film. it was gratuitous in so many ways, but was all the more enjoyable for it! generally terrific performances and well directed. tracy letts adapted his own stage play for the screen and did a great job (i’m amazed this was ever a stage play!). the script was very strong building some intriguing characters and was unpredictable and tense. not for sensitive souls, but very rewarding!

and now those i’ve seen on a screen a little smaller:-

started the new year with rio with the kids. the story was predictable, but there were plenty of belly laugh gags. surprisingly enjoyable!

rabbit hole was disappointing. i thought john cameron mitchell did a really good job visually expanded it from stage to screen, (it didn’t feel like a filmed stage play) but by doing so, the intensity and emotion of the story and characters seemed to be diluted. it had some strong scenes and performances, but they tended to be the ones that were directly lifted from the play. i’d love to see this on stage!

in a lonely place is one of my favourite movies and hands down bogart’s best role/performance. probably gloria grahame’s best too. top script (very lean and dark), and superb direction from nicholas ray. an absolute must see!

rocket science suffers from too-much-indie-quirk syndrome, but was fairly enjoyable nonetheless. some 3rd act surprises gave it a lift!

127 hours was ok. a brave choice by boyle, but he wasn’t brave enough to let the tense script work its magic. didn’t need to be so flashy!

chaplin’s the kid. its short, sweet, moving and very funny. treat the kids to this and give them a break from colour and noise!

despite some good technical work and a few atmospheric moments, danish horror film kollegiet was sadly done in by a script full of clichés and plotholes. the characters were so one-dimensional it was impossible to get emotionally involved, and the film has nothing new to offer.

be kind rewind has a lot of heart and charm. not the out-and-out laughfest i expected, but more enjoyable because of that!

love and other drugs was pretty good for an hour – some snappy dialogue and great chemistry between the leads – but then descends into being oversentimental. not too bad though.

easy a is a smart, engaging high school comedy. the writing is sharp and clever and the characters are well-defined without too much stereotyping. its well-made and zips along at a cracking pace – the only downside was laying on the pop culture references too thick. a very strong cast and a terrific central performance from emma stone.

agora is a powerful, engrossing and very challenging movie that few people seem to have heard of. it looks at religious and philosophical conflicts in 4th century alexandria, and although that doesn’t seem like a ‘fun’ premise, it really is worth hunting down. the heavy subject matter is lightened by a fresh, economical script and alejandro amenábar’s vision is a joy to behold.

wonder boys is a beautifully written movie. subtle characters, which in lesser hands would have been stereotypes, and a great tone. i hope now that harry potter is done, steve kloves now has the time and money to do more of the great work he does here.

cargo is a swiss science fiction thriller that sadly relies on the standard clichés of the genre and even seems to use moments directly from other movies. some of the acting is good, some pretty bad. the writing is not particularly good, but the directing is very solid. there is some great photography and the production design is probably the best thing about this film. for die hard fans of the genre only i’d say!

its been said before but la confidential is a masterclass in adaptation. read the book, watch the film and see what they did – phenomenal!

if you haven’t seen, or even heard of, stake land, then put it on your radar. yes, its a low-budget indie, vampire apocalypse movie, but it is so much more than that. apart from the occasional clunking line of dialogue and an ending that drags just a touch, it is a terrific tense and atmospheric film. well worth hunting down! (pun intended!)

ok, so the blues brothers wouldn’t be the best choice for a masterclass in screenwriting, but the film is so damned entertaining!

ratatouille is pixar’s most consistently enjoyable film in both laughs and storytelling, but i really wish the stakes had been higher!

the ghost writer is like a holiday novel. i kept wanting to know what happened next, but the day after i saw the plotholes and logic lapses!

disappointed with uncle boonmee. had looked forward to it, but it didn’t engage me emotionally or philosophically. stunning visuals tho’!

blades of glory – the structure was a mess, but there’s enough laughs and inspired lunacy to more than make up for it. iron lotus, anyone?

kung fu panda 2 – less focused and structured than 1, but great action and stronger emotional character development. a worthy follow up! could have used more master shifu though!

the adjustment bureau was solid entertainment, which kept focus on the personal story among its big ideas. i can’t help thinking that there was a better movie buried in here somewhere though. still, they kept it nice and tight, and the chemistry between emily blunt and matt damon was great.

timecrimes is fun and playful for about an hour then loses steam – tho’ it has probably the most logical ending for a time travel movie!

chicken run is a lot of fun with some great characters but seems to be missing the heart that aardman animations has for wallace and gromit. still streets ahead of their competitors!

trick ‘r treat was definitely a treat! a cheeky little movie with a few scares, some good laughs and a couple of neat twists! dylan baker and brian cox own the scenes they’re in, and it packs a lot in to its 78 minutes! don’t wait for halloween! check it out now!

finally saw bridesmaids and it was very funny, but not as laugh out loud funny as i expected. but that was a good thing as it turns out because it gave them a chance to develop rounded characters that made for a more satisfying film. a touch overlong, but that is me nit-picking! it deserved all the success it got!

lemony snicket’s a series of unfortunate events – as its title implies was episodic – too much for its own good. i found the voiceover very irritating and overused, which didn’t give the characters room to breathe. i thought the kids were good and the design was terrific, but just couldn’t get emotionally involved with the kids’ journey.

marie & bruce had julianne moore, whom i love, matthew broderick, whom i like, and was written by the magnificent wallace shawn. the film is a complete misfire. i’m sure the play on which it is based works well on stage, but the director was trying way too hard to make it ‘big’. performances are over the top and the characters very irritating. i’d love to see these two perform it on stage though.

the 11th hour is a eco-doc produced and narrated by leonardo dicaprio. as it discusses the world’s eco problems with a wide variety of experts it is really preaching to the converted in a very bombastic way. where this film works is in the 2nd half where many possible solutions are offered, and i found this part both optimistic and very enlightening. way better than an inconvenient truth.

paul was a treat! not up there with other pegg/frost collaborations, but i laughed the whole way through anyway! the chemistry and wordplay between all the main characters was great and all the sci-fi references were fun to play along with. (my favourite was the country & western version of the music from the cantina scene in mos eisley!). this was a lot of fun!

the tree was a slow burning story about the loss of a family member that didn’t grip me as much as i’d hoped it would. everything about it was fine, but i felt it took too long to set up its main idea – thus making it difficult to completely engage in when the emotional storyline kicks in.

big has always been an enjoyable watch, but the joy here was showing it to our 8 year old olivia – she absolutely loved it!! (although we fast-forwarded through the boob touching scene – she’s not quite ready!!). she enjoyed all the fun stuff, but also got to grips with what it would be like to be in that situation, which was a big eye-opener!

the social network i really like, but it is always a bit disappointing that the final half hour plays out in such a formulaic way. i wish that sorkin/fincher had found a way to make the ‘corruption of success’ part of the story more interesting, but i assume they wanted to be faithful to the true story. the first hour and a half is so good though, i guess i’m just being greedy!

the hole was a fun little film, and although not reaching the heights of his best work, its still joe dante – so what’s not to like!! he uses the clichés of the genre to his benefit and there are equal parts laughs and jump scares. too tame for horror fans i suspect, but for movie fans who love to be teased and toyed with, this was a fun, engaging watch! the standout scene involved bruce dern and some lightbulbs!

the taking of pelham one two three (original 74 version) is exciting, funny and has possibly the highest number of angry characters i’ve seen in a single film! this thriller, which has more than its fair share of laughs, is an incredibly enjoyable film with one of the best written scripts in its genre – and the performances make it sing. there’s not one false move in it, the score is magnificent and the final shot is worth your time alone. if you haven’t seen it, treat yourselves!

i finally got to see avatar and the question i asked myself afterwards is how can someone with as much imagination as james cameron has, write a story that is as derivative and clichéd as this one? the characters had no depth and the story beats were obvious way in advance. there were some amazing elements here (i loved the way species literally connected to each other), but the film bored me as a whole. the sad thing is cameron has proved he can write – ‘the terminator’, ‘aliens’ etc – but its clear that’s not where his heart lies now. wanted to like it, but found it very dull!

super 8 started really well, creating some engaging kids’ characters and great overall tension and atmosphere, but then became repetitive, over-manipulative and bombastic. its a shame, because the groundwork had been laid for a movie as good as those j. j. abrams obviously loved so much. sadly, he came up short by attempting to appeal to the modern audience instead of going for the all-out love letter to 80s kids adventure movies. its still worth a watch though as there are plenty of great scenes.

american splendor is a beautifully conceived film. an intriguing story of a fascinating guy that makes me wish that all biopics were this good! “ordinary life is pretty complex stuff”!

i’ll be posting part 2 of this series at the end of august.

if you have any comments then feel free to post them here, otherwise you can find me on twitter and facebook and hassle me there!

happy writing

phil

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my films of 2011

Posted in about me, movielist on January 5, 2012 by scriptguyphil

now that the new year is well under way, i thought i’d take a quick look back at last year and list the movies that i enjoyed. i figure that everyone else is doing it, so why not me…!

i don’t like ranking films as such (although i do have a favourite), so this list is chronological. it is also divided into cinema releases and films i have caught up this year with either on dvd, tv or online. i find that watching films on the big screen is a vastly different experience to watching at home, so i feel the need to separate them!

so without further ado, here we go…

favourite cinema films

winter’s bone

written by debra granik & anne rosellini

this is a film that seems to have been made with me in mind! a beautifully balanced blend of my two favourite genres – social realism and film noir – it had me engrossed from minute one and refused to let go. this would be my personal film of the year!

black swan

written by mark heyman and andres heinz and john j. mclaughlin

a terrific mix of art film and exploitation, this was a treat for the eyes and the ears.

dogtooth

written by giorgos lanthimos & efthymis filippou

an intriguing and thought-provoking premise that sticks to its guns and pays off its set-up to great effect.

drive

written by hossein amini

an intense and exciting film that helps to prove that a strong script is more than simply good dialogue.

oslo 31 august

written by joachim trier & eskil vogt

a terrific character study of a reformed drug addict trying to reconnect with his old friends and the city in which he  lives.

crulic – the path to beyond

written by anca damian

an engrossing animated documentary about a miscarriage of justice. certainly the most unusual cinema experience of the year, it was both enlightening and satisfying.

kill list

written by ben wheatley & amy jump

i thought this was a masterclass in how to build tension, and even though there are some narrative flaws, it was probably the most visceral experience of the year.

other notable films seen at the cinema this year

cyrus (mark duplass & jay duplass)  –  the social network (aaron sorkin)

true grit (joel coen & ethan coen)  –  easy a (bert v. royal)

exit through the gift shop (no credited writer)

biggest disappointment of the year

hanna, (written by seth lochhead and david farr), which i found to be cold and lacking in emotion – although you have to love that soundtrack!

favourite films seen in other formats —

humpday

written by lynn shelton

a funny and poignant film about friendship with some terrific character work.

the white ribbon

written by michael haneke

a beautiful film where the visuals and the script work in perfect harmony to tell a powerful story.

sin nombre

written by cary fukunaga

what was so great about this film and its writing was that it tells such a small, simple story, whilst commenting on a vast social problem and the fragility of life.

four lions

written by christopher morris, jesse armstrong, sam bain and simon blackwell

the one film i was upset i missed at the cinema, it was everything i hoped for, and much, much more. the way this film balances its humour with the subject matter is simply masterful. the script is crisp and funny, but it also has some of the most touching scenes i have seen for some time.

dead man’s shoes

written by paddy considine & shane meadows

it took me a while to catch up with this film, but it was worth the wait. an absolutely electric film, though not for the faint of heart!

a town called panic

written by stéphane aubier & vincent patar

this is my kind of animation! surreal and very, very funny. i was laughing so hard i had trouble breathing during parts of this film!

black snake moan

written by craig brewer

a provocative and highly charged study of two people at the end of their ropes and how they use and fight each other to save themselves. a great script, well-performed.

other notable films

world’s greatest dad (bobcat goldthwait)  – mary & max (adam elliot)

cloudy with a chance of meatballs (phil lord & christopher miller)

a single man (tom ford & david scearce)  –  senna (manish pandey)

valhalla rising (nicolas winding refn & roy jacobsen)

the disappearance of alice creed (j blakeson)

thirst (chan-wook park and seo-gyeong jeong)

irina palm (martin herron & philippe blasband and sam garbarski)

triangle (christopher smith)  –   black sheep (jonathan king)

the biggest disappointments —

slumdog millionaire (simon beaufoy)

shutter island (laeta kalogridis)  –  youth in revolt (gustin nash)

public enemies (ronan bennett and michael mann & ann biderman)

wanted (michael brandt & derek haas and chris morgan)

an inconvenient truth (no credited writer)

these films were my favourites because the stories and characters engaged me on an emotional level to a very high degree – and that is what i hope for every time the lights go down, or crack open a new script for that matter!

to catch my mini-reviews throughout the year you can join me on twitter and facebook.

i hope 2012 is your best year yet, so until next time…

happy writing

phil

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what i hope this blog will do

Posted in about me, script development, the business on May 10, 2011 by scriptguyphil

my aim in this blog is to give a little insight in the script development process and the day-to-day workings of how a script moves through the various stages from idea to production.

i’m very much a nuts-and-bolts kind of guy who sees each and every script as a new, inviting challenge. that means that i’m going to tackle specific issues with these posts and look as often as possible at the aspects of script writing not as readily discussed.

i will also attempt, as often as possible, to write updates on my own personal working week to enable you to get as deeply into how a script develop process can work.

so stay tuned and hopefully they will be something on this blog that you like and can use. if not, then please let me know and i’ll happily turn your suggestions into blog posts.

happy writing

phil